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my comparison essay introduction paragraph. can someone help me think of what to wrtie before the "an analysis...." i just need a general idea of what to write because im stuck.
here the intro:
Miley Cyrus song “The Climb” is not only one of my favourite songs, but so is Katy Perry’s song “Fireworks”. An analysis of the literary devices in Katy perry’s “Fireworks” and Miley Cyrus “The Climb” reveals Miley Cyrus creates a better argument for how every person is an exclusice individual who has dreams to follow and chase it; while along the way, just be you. Katy Perry’s use of metaphor and imagery will be compared to Miley Cyrus use of metaphor and imageryin order to illustrate Cyrus’s superiority in goal delivery.

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  1. correct spelling = exclusive
    dreams to follow and chase
    separate "imageryin" = imagery in

    'The hymn "Let Your Light Shine" inspires us to be our best (and Jesus' words), to do good deeds and to help make the world a better place. Two modern songs also express this, with different words.

    Do you like that as an introduction? Often a quote is a good way to begin an essay.

    If you need anything on figurative language (metaphors, similes, etc.) there are many Websites to help you.

    Sra

    posted by SraJMcGin

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