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thank you so much for taking so much time into helping me perfect my french essay
I have done the corrections you have told me to do and I was wondering if you could go through and make sure the lanuage and grammar are all perfect.
And thank you I really appricate it

Also, how do you say "its fun"

Bonjour, Mathilde
Je m’appelle Ellie. J’ai quatorze ans et mon anniverse c’est le sept juillet. J’ai les cheveux longs et marron et J’ai les yeux marrons. Je suis Anglaise. J’habite a’ Buckhurst Hill en Angleterre. J'aime danser et j'adore les animaux. Mes animaux préférés sont les chiens et les chats. Je déteste les araignées. J’adore les achats parce que (it’s fun). J’avais l’habitude d’aimer jouer avec mes poupées. Je vais écouter de la musique parce que j’adore la musique. Je vais aussi faire mes devoirs d'art. A mon avis je suis tout à fait hyper et j’adore rire et sourire.
J’ai un frére et une soeur. Ils s’appellent Tom et Jennifer. J’adore le frére parce qu’il toujours m’aide. Quand j’etais plus jeune j’avais l’habitude de me battre avec mon frère mais pas maintenant parce que nous sommes plus âgés. Comme nous sommes plus âgés nous j'espère que nous restions proches. Je m'entends bien avec ma famille.
A mon avis le mariage est une bonne chose. Il montre que deux personnes s'aiment. A mon avis il est important pour les enfants de grandir dans une relation mariée et il montre que deux personnes s’aiment. il est important qu’ils grandissent dans une relation mariée. Quand je suis plus ágée, je veux me marier.
Mes amis sont gentils et attentionnés et ils ont vraiment soin de moi. Mes amis sont si gentil et je les aime tous. Ma copine est toujours là pour moi. Elles sont étonnantes.
Dans mon temps libre J'aime faire les achats et être avec mes amis. J’aime aussi rester à la maison et me détendre. Je vais en ville avec mes copains.
Hier, j'ai fait des courses et j'ai dépensé tout mon argent. J'ai acheté des charges de vêtements et beaucoup de maquillage. C'était amusant !!!!
Le weekend prochain, je vais regarder un film et sortir pour dîner. C’est super!!!!!!
Je ne peux pas attendre pour vous voir et désolée que mon français no soit pas très bon. Je vais essayer d'améliorer quand je te vois.
Je ne peux pas attendre vous voir
Au revoir
Ellie

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  1. I read a later post first, under RUTH. Are you RUTH or ELLIE? Hopefully you are not the SAME person, because yours looks so much better!

    it's fun = ça m'amuse (that amuses me)

    âgés nous j'espère = either drop nous, or put a comma after it. It's fine there for emphasis, if you wish, but without proper punctuation, it's not understandable

    Quand j'étais (just forgot the accent)

    une relation mariée et il montre = because the last thing you said was "une relation" the "il" must be "elle"

    gentil = gentils, because it must be plural to agree with "amis"

    Dans mon temps libre J'aime faire = not necessary to capitalize J' within the sentence = j'aime

    Commendable, Ellie! You have reestablished my faith!

    Sra (aka Mme)

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  2. I am Ellie but Ruth is my friend and is in my class for french so we are doing the same work
    thank you

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