essay writing

my prof said that I used next I will discuss way too much so now i'm thinking of other things to say other than discuss but I can't think of anything. this is when im stating my arguments in my introduction.

any suggestions?

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  1. Cross out all of your words that say, "next I will discuss." What do you have left? Make these positive statements.

  2. Oh, I never thought of that. Thanks a bunch!

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  3. You're welcome.

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