Were all my corections OK (except complimentary?).
I’d like you to check the following clothes’ descriptions as well as a few journey’s arrangements (in particular the use of prepositions of location or of time with “holiday”, “hotel”, and “square”). Thank you very much.
1)The old man is wearing a black suit with a white shirt and a white-and-blue striped tie.
2)The girl in the picture is wearing a beige leather jacket with a short-sleeved yellow blouse underneath, a pair of skinny, washed-out jeans and a pair of white-and-red-polka-dot ankle socks.
3) She is also wearing a pair of black high-heeled shoes.
4)A black boy is wearing a grey-and-black checked bandana, a black hoodie and blue tracksuit bottoms. He has sports lace-up shoes on.
5)We are free to have lunch where we want. We are going to have breakfast and dinner at the hotel (also “in the hotel?).
6) I’m accommodated at the (not in?) Bristol hotel. I’m going to do the shopping (to go shopping) at Harrot’s. I’m going to have a packed lunch (a lunch box).
yes on the others
#6 is that Harrods? accommodated at or in the Bristol hotel.
Sra
1) OK
2)The girl in the picture is wearing a beige leather jacket with a short-sleeved yellow blouse underneath, a pair of skinny, washed-out jeans, and a pair of white-and-red-polka-dot ankle socks.
3) OK
4)A black boy is wearing a grey-and-black checked bandana, a black hoodie, and blue tracksuit pants. He has lace-up athletic shoes on.
5)We are free to have lunch where we want. We are going to have breakfast and dinner at the hotel. IN THE HOTEL - WORKS FINE, TOO.
6) I’m staying at the Bristol hotel. I’m going shopping at Harrod’s. I’m going to have a box lunch prepared.
1) The corrections for this sentence are fine! The description of the old man's outfit is clear and accurate.
2) The corrections for this sentence are also correct, except for the word "clothes'". It should be "clothing" instead. Additionally, the phrase "washed-out jeans" should have a hyphen between "washed" and "out" to make it a compound adjective. Regarding the prepositions, you can say "in the picture" and "underneath the jacket". However, it would be more natural to say "short-sleeved yellow blouse", without the hyphen between "short" and "sleeved". Also, "pair of white-and-red-polka-dot ankle socks" is good.
3) The correction for this sentence is correct. The preposition "in" is the appropriate choice when describing someone wearing shoes.
4) The correction for this sentence is also correct! The description of the boy's outfit is clear and accurate. The use of the preposition "on" with "shoes" is correct here.
5) The correction for this sentence is fine! Both "at the hotel" and "in the hotel" are acceptable phrases to use. "In the hotel" could imply that you will be inside the hotel while having breakfast and dinner, whereas "at the hotel" could mean you will have the meals in the vicinity of the hotel, such as in a nearby restaurant associated with the hotel.
6) The correction for this sentence is correct! You should use "at the Bristol hotel" instead of "in the Bristol hotel". The use of "to go shopping" is also more natural. "A lunch box" is a good alternative to "packed lunch".