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Have you ever noticed that the most important man in America every day when you are shopping, looking through your wallet, and even going to the bank? Well…the most important man in America is our 1st president George Washington, and he is on our one dollar bill and even the quarter He is such an important person he is mentioned about almost everywhere, such as schools, towns, counties, states and even the capitol. We all should give our 1st President all the praises because without him, we could have might still be under the British rule. My essay is going to explain George Washington’s importance and how George Washington is a role model to all Americans, he has shown bravery, courage, and determination. One reason is because George Washington was a great leader of a new and not yet an independent nation, this makes George Washington an amazing person. Another reason is because George Washington was s the 1st president to be elected unanimously, but he indeed did not abuse his powers, but used it for good in making America stronger. This is why George Washington is a role model because he has shown bravery, courage, and determination.
One reason George Washington is a role model to all Americans, he has shown bravery, courage, and determination because George Washington was a great leader of a new and not yet an independent nation, this makes George Washington an amazing person. I say this because George Washington had a great experience from the French-Indian War. He was also a good leader when he led attempted to lead his army against the angry farmers in the Whiskey Rebellion. I believe that it was very brave for him to do this because many people were against him and rebelling and no matter what he still stood up for what he believed in and that the law was right. George Washington was passionate about America becoming free. This is one reason why George Washington is a role model to all Americans; he has shown bravery, courage, and determination because George Washington was a great leader of a new and not yet an independent nation, this makes George Washington an amazing person.
Another reason George Washington is a role model to all Americans, he has shown bravery, courage, and determination because George Washington was s the 1st president to be elected unanimously, but he indeed did not abuse his powers, but used it for good in making America stronger. This is because George Washington could have been king, but instead at the end of the war, and again at the end of his presidency, he walked away from the power of his office and never looked back. When the Treaty of Paris was signed and the war was officially over, some of George Washington's advisors wanted him to take power of the United States and establish a monarchy that would make him king. It could have happened if Washington would have allowed, he did not become a king. This shows that the 1st president, George Washington used his powers for good and not abusing them. George Washington devoted all his energy in serving the new nation. Therefore, you can see why George Washington is a role model to all Americans, he has shown bravery, courage, and determination because George Washington was s the 1st president to be elected unanimously, but he indeed did not abuse his powers, but used it for good in making America stronger.
George Washington is a role model because he had brought up a “un united” nation together, by full determination, self-confident when leading our fragile country. George Washington came across many hardships with had tested his bravery and courage, and he was determined to protect his country in any way he can. As our first president, George Washington helped our country unite with reliable determination. All presidents can come after George Washington, which use him as an example to safe problems in the future and look to him as a role model by his great personalities. George Washington is a role model to all Americans; he has shown bravery, courage, and determination.

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