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Another way to change these sentences "In conclusion, it takes discipline, time management, preparation, a computer, various tips, finances, and a desire to prepare for a major life change in going back to college for a degree. There are many things that a student needs to consider before returning to school; one of these is formulating an academic plan and the other is managing student stress."

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  1. Start with your last sentence.

    Rephrase everything so that no sentence has more than two clauses in it ... one main clause per sentence would be even better.

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  2. John !@#$%^&ennedy was born in a family with a history of political and public service

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