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Which of these make more sense/sound better?

Please remove all information with regards to my account from your servers.

Please remove all information related to my account from your servers.

Thank you.

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  1. The 2nd. The first would be "with regard to"

    Sra

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  2. I agree with Sra. The second one is MUCH better -- smoother; more concise.

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