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Is the grammar in this sentence correct and does it sound alright. Its a piece from my research paper.

To give the roof that authentic Cotswold style, stone shingles, which grew smaller and smaller as they ascended toward the peak, were imported from England.

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asked by Kayden
  1. Imported from England,stone shingles, which became smaller and smaller as they ascended toward the peak, were used to give the roof an authentic Cotswold style.

    I think rearranging will make the sentence more succinct.

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