Can you please see if my corrections are ok? Thank you very much for helping me.

1) Refer then to the point of view from which a narration (instead of narrative story) can be told and the types of characters involved.
2) What message of nature does Davies want to convey in his poem "Leisure"?
1) According to Poe, poetry and prose mustn't/shouldn't have "a moral purpose" (and not "any moral purpose". Poe tried to make the reader feel fear.(or to arouse a feeling of fear in the reader?)
2)People had always to go to church. Correction: They had to attend church regularly
3)They are asked to do their monotonous work without any possibility of escaping their soul-destroying routine.
4)The smoke coiled up from chimneys like serpents.
5) Workhouses sprang up all over England to give shelter to the poor (can you say to provide shelter for the poor), whose workforce was exploited.
6)Coketown was a town of red brick, which was blackened by industrial polllution.
7) Its inhabitants were all corrupt.
8) The father was seen as the authority, who took decisions (can you say "all the decisions") for his family.
9) The town is described through two similes.

1,2. Good

1. Shouldn't and the rest is good.
2-4 good
5. yes, you can use both.
6 - 7. good
8. who made all the decisions....
9. good