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I need to know if this is a good narrative paragraph on sharing the telephone.
Saturday morning Hailey and Melissa wanted the phone at 7oclock. I quickly told them that it was too early to call someone. After Hailey and Melissa started to argue, Melissa proceeded to make a phone call. Then I told her they needed to wait. We waited for two hours. Later there was a fight to use the phone. I finally told them that they needed to share the phone and take turns.

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  1. Yes, that is a good narrative paragraph.

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