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I am very sorry about her mother who has killed by drunk driver Zeke and I felt bad about Kate because she lost her mom. I wish her mom was alive and never get upset.

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I am very sorry about her mother who was killed by the drunk driver, Zeke, and I felt bad about Kate because she lost her mom. I wish her mom was alive and never got upset.

I am very sorry about her mother who was killed by the drunk driver. Zeke and I felt bad about Kate because she lost he mom,I wish her mom was alive and never got upset.

I'm really sorry to hear about the tragic event involving Kate's mother and the drunk driver named Zeke. It's empathetic of you to feel bad for Kate's loss, and it's natural to wish her mom were still alive and for her not to be upset.