Im a Danish student, and I've written this summary which I would like someone to correct. Thanks in advance!
In the short story”Beyond the pale”, published in 1888, author Rudyard Kipling states via his narrator that one should stick to its caste. Trejago, who's a white man, transgresses this boundary because of his excitement in the native life. He presses on into the alley, Amir Nath's Gully, where meets and begins a dangerous affair with Bisesa, a fifteen-year-old widow. One thing leads to another and they secretly become passionate lovers. Despite his feelings, he pays heavily for stepping beyond the limits of his own people. The discovery of the affair precipitates violence and tragedy. The passage of horror, Bisesa has her hands severed from her body and her white lover is deeply wounded in the groin. The embarrassing lapse comes to him and he looses his reason. He returns to the law-abiding world of colonial respectability, from which he will never venture again.
In the short story, "Beyond the Pale," published in 1888, author Rudyard Kipling states via his narrator that one should stick to his caste. Trejago, a white man, crosses this boundary because of his excitement in the native life. He presses on into the alley, Amir Nath's Gully, where he meets and begins a dangerous affair with Bisesa, a fifteen-year-old widow. One thing leads to another<~~add comma and they secretly become passionate lovers. Despite his feelings, he pays heavily for stepping beyond the limits of his own people. The discovery of the affair precipitates violence and tragedy. The passage of horror, Bisesa's hands are severed from her body<~~add comma and her white lover is deeply wounded in the groin. The embarrassing lapse comes to him<~~add comma and he loses his reason. He returns to the law-abiding world of colonial respectability, from which he will never venture again.
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I'm not sure what you mean by the following:
** "because of his excitement in the native life"
** "The passage of horror,"
** "The embarrassing lapse comes to him"
In the short story "Beyond the Pale," written by Rudyard Kipling and published in 1888, the author emphasizes the importance of adhering to one's social status or caste. The protagonist, Trejago, who is a white man, defies this boundary due to his fascination with the native culture. He ventures into a narrow alley called Amir Nath's Gully, where he encounters and initiates a forbidden relationship with Bisesa, a fifteen-year-old widow.
As their passion intensifies, Trejago and Bisesa engage in a secret love affair. However, their actions come with severe consequences. The revelation of their relationship triggers violence and tragedy. In a horrific turn of events, Bisesa has her hands severed from her body, and Trejago, the white lover, is gravely injured in the groin. Overwhelmed by shame and guilt, Trejago loses his sanity. He retreats back to the world of colonial respectability, where he will never dare to venture beyond those boundaries again.
Now, regarding the correction of your summary, there are a few changes that can be made to improve the wording and clarity:
In the short story "Beyond the Pale," published in 1888, author Rudyard Kipling conveys through his narrator the importance of adhering to one's caste. The protagonist, Trejago, a white man, crosses this boundary driven by his fascination with native life. He ventures into Amir Nath's Gully, a narrow alley, and there he initiates a dangerous affair with Bisesa, a fifteen-year-old widow. Their secret relationship leads to passionate love. However, stepping beyond the limits of his own people comes at a great cost.
The discovery of their affair results in violence and tragedy. Bisesa has her hands severed, and Trejago suffers a severe groin injury. Overwhelmed by shame, Trejago loses his sanity. He retreats to the world of colonial respectability, never to venture beyond its confines again.