Outline the following achievement for Walter Raleigh i've got:
Walter Raleigh was Gilbert's half brother who tried to set up a colony farther south. He named the colony Virginia after Elizabeth. H eintroduced tobacco into England.
is this good?
Just one typo = H eintroduced = He introduced (spelling)
Sraposted by SraJMcGin
okay, thanks but overall do you think it is good?