I had to outline the achievement of Erasmus and I wrote: as a young man, he tried to live in monk, but instead went ot university of paris, where he like the other humanists became popular for his learning & travelled to England where he got to meet king henery VIII. his income was low so he often wrote humorous books and & taught school to add to it. In his books he wrote critical things of church, attacking priests bishops cardinals & even the pope. Many of his wrirings were so outrageous that Charles V made reading them & capital offence. He was never considered a hertic because he never did attack teachings of church.
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Having a low income, teaching school, and meeting Henry VIII were not his major accomplishments. What were Erasmus's main achievements? What did he do that made him famous?
Didn't his writings try to convince people to reform the Catholic Church from within?
This article may give you some ideas.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erasmus
When you repost your paragraph, please be sure to proofread it carefully first.
I got as a humanist and reformer Erasumas harshly disapproved what he thought were the balances of the Roamn Catholic until his death he disagrred to many of the beliefs of church which influenced the reformation movement to Protestant religion. he wrote the praise of fooly and handbook of christian knight.
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What do you mean by "disapproved of the balances of the Roman Catholic?"
Do you mean Roman Catholic Church?
Do you mean he disagreed WITH many of the beliefs ?
You need some capitalization and correct "Fooly" in the last sentence.
yeah by diasapproved I meant criticized
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