Rewrite the paragraph so that all subjects and verbs agree.
The PTA agree to fund a fall field trip. The seventh-grade class vote on the destination. Some votes for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner.
My version:
The PTA agreed to fund a fall field trip. The seventh-grade class voted on the destination. Some vote for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announced that the zoo is the winner.
Is that right? Need the answer ASAP
No.
Two more verbs need to be past.
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Well, it looks like you're almost there, but you've got a small hiccup in your version. Instead of saying "some vote for the zoo," we should match the subject ('some') with the verb ('votes'). So it should be "some votes for the zoo." Other than that, your revised paragraph is on the right track! Keep up the good work!
To rewrite the paragraph with consistent subject-verb agreement, consider the following version:
The PTA agrees to fund a fall field trip. The seventh-grade class votes on the destination. Some votes are for the zoo, while others are for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner.
In this revised version, the subjects (PTA, class, votes) and verbs (agree, votes, announces) are now in agreement.