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It was Wednesday morning, November 15, 2006 and I woke up early than usual not being able to sleep because I had a AP Physics test that day.


is there another way to put this in a sentence with all the information i want. it seems too long and too clumped together.

You have done it in one sentence, but it is an awkward "run-on" sentence that is actually two separate sentences separated by an "and". The word "early" should be "earlier", and there should be a comma after "not".

A somewhat better way to say it in one sentence would be:

On Wednesday morning, November 15 of 2006, I woke up earlier than usual, unable to sleep because I had a AP Physics test that day.

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