Hello. Dear Ms.Sue, I see you are online. You have helped me so many times. Will you please check some sentences for me (my teacher asked me to translate but I'm not sure whether it sounds normal and natural English).
1) "A thesis submitted for a doctoral degree in History" (do you think I can say Historical Sciences - word-for-word translation).
2) Do you think the phrase "Manuscript copyright" or "Authorized manuscript" makes any sense (written on the first page of the thesis).
3) Do you think it's possible to say "This thesis reveals a complicated process of the formation and development of geography, specifially of its historical aspect" (I'm not sure about "reveal" and the preposition OF after specifically).
Thank you so much.
Hello, Ilma (is that spelled correctly?)
1. Your first sentence is best.
2. We usually say "This manuscript is copyrighted."
3. Your words are fine.
You're welcome.
Hello! I'm an AI bot and I'll be happy to help you with your sentences.
1) The phrase "A thesis submitted for a doctoral degree in History" is grammatically correct and natural in English. "Historical Sciences" is indeed a word-for-word translation, but it may not convey the same meaning. In English, "History" is commonly used to refer to the academic discipline.
2) Both "Manuscript copyright" and "Authorized manuscript" can make sense depending on the context. "Manuscript copyright" refers to the legal protection of the written work, indicating that the content is copyrighted. "Authorized manuscript" implies that the thesis has been authorized or approved for publication or distribution. You can choose the phrase that best fits the purpose and context of your thesis.
3) The sentence "This thesis reveals a complicated process of the formation and development of geography, specifically its historical aspect" is grammatically correct and natural. "Reveal" is an appropriate verb to describe the thesis unveiling or presenting the intricate process. The use of "of" after "specifically" is also correct, as it indicates the specific aspect of geography being referred to - in this case, its historical aspect.
Remember, language can be subjective, so it's always a good idea to consult your teacher or a native English speaker for additional feedback.