Is being overly skinny, not eating regularly or cosmetic surgery really appealing? Well were in a society were celebrities has taken over individuals lives. Making their confidence go even down. We have to put in our mind that plastic surgery won’t help you to overcome your need it will trouble you a lot, you have to face major problems
could you correct this for me please
Use complete sentences (subject and verb). Make sure your subjects and verbs match (celebrities is plural - more than one - has is singular - one has, they have). Check were to put commas and apostrophes.
Follow Reed's directions and then re-post. Someone here will tell you if you're getting things corrected or not.
For example, you typed "were" when you meant "we are" (or "we're"). That and all the things Reed named are corrections you need to make.
Is being overly skinny, not eating regularly or cosmetic surgery really appealing? Well, we're in a society where celebrities have taken over individuals' lives. Making their confidence go even down. We have to put in our mind that plastic surgery won’t help you to overcome your need it will trouble you a lot, you have to face major problems is it correct
No. The phrase beginning "Making" is a clause, not a sentence. It does not say whose confidence is in question, either. The sentence beginning "We have" is run-on. It could be three sentences or two (with a conjunction or semi-colon in the right place).
You also do not explain how celebrities have taken over lives or how that relates to being skinny, cosmetic surgery, etc.
Is being excessively skinny, not eating regularly, or having cosmetic surgery really appealing? Well, we live in a society where celebrities have taken over individuals' lives, causing their self-confidence to decrease. However, it is important to remember that plastic surgery cannot help you overcome your insecurities; in fact, it can create more difficulties and significant problems that you will have to face.
I have made some minor corrections to improve the clarity and coherence of the statement.