Please help me to arrange correct grammar below:
Nov. 18,2015
Please be informed that starting on Nov.23, 2015
Due to high consumptiom for the electric bills
The internet usage charge will be P15.00 per hour and there will be no more promo for P25.00 2 hours.
Thank you for your kind understanding.
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due to the high consumption of electric bill, the internet usage will be charge P 15.00 per hour and no more promotion for P 25.00 for 2 hours.
Here is the corrected grammar:
Nov. 18, 2015
Please be informed that starting on Nov. 23, 2015, due to high consumption of electricity, the internet usage charge will be P15.00 per hour. There will no longer be a promo for P25.00 for 2 hours.
Thank you for your kind understanding.
Explanation:
1. Date format: The correct format for writing the date is Month, Day, Year. So, it should be "Nov. 18, 2015."
2. Starting Date: When mentioning a specific date, it's important to capitalize the month and clarify the day. Thus, it should be "starting on Nov. 23, 2015."
3. Sentence structure: Each sentence should be properly structured to ensure clarity and readability. So, "Due to high consumptiom for the electric bills" should be separated into a separate sentence as "Due to high consumption of electricity."
4. Usage charge: To make it clear that the charge is per hour, it should be stated as "the internet usage charge will be P15.00 per hour."
5. No promo: The sentence "and there will be no more promo for P25.00 2 hours" can be revised to "There will no longer be a promo for P25.00 for 2 hours," making it more natural and clear.
6. Gratitude: In the last line, it is polite to express appreciation. So, it should be "Thank you for your kind understanding."