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There are a lot of side dishes on the table such as cooked potherbs, pickled cucumbers, cooked beans, soybean sprout soup, vegetable soup, kimchi, pickled garlics, cooked radishes, etc.
I sometimes eat cereal and milk. I enjoy fruit soup for breakfast. For digestion, thin rice gruel is suitable. I think I can improve the function of my stomach and intestines.
Usually in our country, people like to eat boiled rice and kimchi together with other side dishes for meals. I sometimes eat green peppers. I eat green peppers with soybean paste.

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I made up a passage for practicing English writing. Would you check the sentences and correct any errors?

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  1. It's all correct with one comma needed and a couple of suggestions:

    Comma is needed after "table" in the first sentence.

    Think about combining these two sentences to avoid repetition:
    I sometimes eat cereal and milk. I enjoy fruit soup for breakfast.

    And combine these two also:
    I sometimes eat green peppers. I eat green peppers with soybean paste.

    Let us know what you come up with, and we'll be happy to give you more feedback.

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