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I am an aspiring human rights advocate attending the University of Baltimore. I am an individual with many social and political concerns. I am invested in this because I believe…that regardless of individual’s sexual multiplicities and social identities, everyone deserves to be acknowledged, included, respected, and protected.
Although I am not part of the LGTQQ community, as an outsider, I personally know someone that this bill would relate to. People not in the LGTQQ community may not understand the political forces that impact people in the LGTQQ community and therefore may not fight for them because it does not directly impact them. I would like to propose a bill that would have an impact/effect on the LGTQQ community. My bill will fully recognize, include, respect, and protect them from unfair criminalization, homelessness, employment discrimination, health disparities, and homelessness and other factors that make LGTQQ vulnerable to the impact of inequality of all LGTQQ community. This bill is necessary for providing a safety measure for the LGTQQ community. This bill will lower the risk of homeless and suicide, many people of the LGTQQ community face a particular set of challenges, living in poorness becoming victims and, on top of that trying to avoid being on the streets at an early age.

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    good!

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    necessary for providing a safety
    =
    necessary as a safety measure....

    risk of homelessness

    suicide. ==== then new sentence ===

    living in poverty

    : living in poverty, becoming victims and trying to.....

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    Huh

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    My bill will fully recognize, include, respect, and protect them from unfair criminalization, exclusion, employment discrimination, health disparities, and homelessness and other factors that make LGTQQ vulnerable to the impact of inequality of all LGTQQ community. This bill is necessary as a safety measure for the LGTQQ community. This bill will lower the risk of homelessness and suicide. Many people of the LGTQQ community face a particular set of challenges, living in poverty, becoming victims and trying to avoid being on the streets at an early age. Is this what must happen in order to gain America's attention to this issue? To live in fear and hide for because of who they are? People who work to find information have found that attempted

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    To live in fear and hide [FOR???] because

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    for being who they are

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    good

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    Many hide their identity and live in isolation or even fear. Others experience discrimination, and even violence, when being themselves.

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    yes

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    Although I am not part of the LGTQQ community, as an outsider, I personally know someone that this bill would relate to. People not in the LGTQQ community may not understand the political forces that impact people in the LGTQQ community and therefore may not fight for them because it does not directly impact them. I would like to propose a bill that would have an impact/effect on the LGTQQ community. My bill will fully recognize, include, respect, and protect them from unfair criminalization, exclusion, employment discrimination, health disparities, and homelessness and other factors that make LGTQQ vulnerable to the impact of inequality of all LGTQQ community. This bill is necessary as a safety measure for the LGTQQ community. This bill will lower the risk of homelessness and suicide. Many people of the LGTQQ community face a particular set of challenges, living in poverty, becoming victims and trying to avoid being on the streets at an early age. Is this what must happen in order to gain America's attention to this issue? Many hide their identity and live in isolation or even fear. Others experience discrimination, and even violence, when being themselves.

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    The "Q" is usually not used anymore.

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/LGBT

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    Got it!!!! Thanks!

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