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Thesis: My favorite thing to do is listen to music.

Transition--

Cool Closing Sentence: "Sing like no one is listening, dance like no one is watching, love like you'll never get hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth"

I need help on my transition sentence. Should it be; I love music ?

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    It could be.

    It's impossible to judge without seeing the entire essay.

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    When writing an essay make sure that you do not use the word I a lot so that your paper keeps the attention of your audience.

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    "Sing like no one is listening, dance like no one is watching..."

    Isn't that a quotation from someone? Mark Twain maybe?

    DO NOT PLAGIARIZE!

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    I looked for the author and only found "anonymous."

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