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is this a good thesis statement for a paper i have to write about changes in the us from 1776 to 1870? "while we are still not a perfect country, political,social and economical changes are shaping up out country" is it ok or is there anything i can do to make it better?

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    The LEO website advises students to write a controversial thesis sentence.

    You've just stated a fact.

    Were these changes all good? Were they all bad? Were there disadvantages to these changes?

    Also you don't want to use the present tense. You're writing about a period that ended over 140 years ago.

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    how do i make mine better though

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    Please don't post again unless you can show some indication that you've heeded my advice and studied the website I posted.

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