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can you plz correct it
Howdy comrades! Shouldn’t surprise anyone that we took a beating this year, given the insane pricing moves our knucklehead competitors have been making. I mean how those clowns can keep turning a profit is beyond me, what with steel costs still going through the roof and labour costs heating up – even in countries where everybody goes to find cheap labour – and hazardous waste disposal regs adding to operating costs too.

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    What is the purpose of this note?

    Who is the audience?

    What does the writer want the reader to do?

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    would you please rephrase it?
    my boss has given me to rewrite it for international employees.
    i want it to have in simple english so that every body can understand

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