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Rewrite this passage using the corect punctuation..one suuny day mrs brown decided to take her family for a picnic in the new forest she made a big pile of sandwiches and put them in a plastic box colin packed some cans of coca cola for the children to drink mr brown make a flask of coffe for himself and his wife tom filled a tin with biscuits and tiny cakes sarah put oranges plums apples and bananas into a bag when the food was ready they packed it in the boot of the car and set off their day out

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    One sunny day Mrs. Brown decided to take her family for a picnic in the new forest.

    I'll be glad to check your corrections for the rest of the paragraph. Be sure to use appropriate capitalization and proofread for typos.

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