Social Studies 8R - paragraph help!!!!
posted by Laruen .
He earned most of his fortune in the steel industry. In the 1870s, he founded the Carnegie Steel Company.
is there any details I should add to this paragraph
is about how he make his money
Yes. Two sentences is not a good paragraph for an eighth grader.
I need about 2 or one more sentence
my teacher doesn't want a 2 paragraph essay since it's a powerpoint
Goodness, Lauren. With all of the sites I've posted, you should have a ton of details to add to this paragraph -- which should be at least 6 sentences long.
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