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I am writing my essays and I wrote them but i not know how to start the beginnings of them. this on movie smoke signals. i am writing on themes, but i cant start intro like "in the film .. because someone else be doing that for movie review, so i not know how to start with themes. i want to do something like "there are many compelling themes in this movie that take you on ride through feeling of your own emotions ?

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    How about --

    Many compelling themes in this movie that take you on ride through feeling of your own emotions.

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    thanks ms. sue :)

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    You're welcome --

    A correction -- eliminate "that" and "feeling of".

    Many compelling themes in this movie take you on ride through your own emotions.

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    Thanks ms. sue :)

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    You're welcome, Mohammad.

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