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i think of doing mental illness story on stress. i think of doing this in third-person. my friend sort of add and give me more ideas for this story i be doing. please tell me if it be good and give any other ideas.

and this third-person be close person to main character. someone else that be close to main character dies and character goes under deep stress and begins to put itself in third person's shoes. it begins to believe it be this person, the mind of the main character starts connecting with third person's mind, and the main character begins escaping from itself the third person is complete opposite of character's close friend that has died. all three are closely related with each other.

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    I think this will work, but you can tell when you've written the story.

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    I also show my cousin this but she say it not really make sense to her when main character step into third person shoes. how i make it more making sense?

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    Do you mean that the character believes she or he IS the other person?

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