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I urgently need to check this paragraph. I need to revise word choice, punctuation, sentence connectors and grammar. I really hope you can help me.

1) The 18-th century novels represent the contemporary middle-class and its virtues and features; so the hero is always a self-made and self-reliant bourgeois man who gets into many adventures, during which he can show his skills in order to make his own destiny.
2) The hero often acts like a European colonizer, too.
The novels are mosty narrated by a first person narrator who gives many details about place (for example city names), about time and the hero himself such as the novel was an autobiography.
3) This kind of novel is dedicated to the middle-class and it is made in this particular way so that the readers can sympathize for the hero who is very similar to them.

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