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THERE ONCE WAS A CLASS NAMED 210
THEY KEPT TALKING AND TALKING AGAIN
MRS.BESDEN CAME INSIDE
AND ALL THEIR EYES WERE OPENED WIDE
AND THERE WAS SILENCE THEN

  • TO MS.SUE -

    Good. It would be better if you dropped the word "and" in the fourth and fifth lines.

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