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Original sentence: The urgent care center offers a variety of services such as physician appointments, mental health, health education programs, and lab and X-ray work.

My corrections: The urgent care center offers physician appointments, mental health evaluations, health education programs, lab analysis, and X-ray screenings.

Did I correct the parallelism problems in this sentence?

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    appointments
    evaluations
    programs
    analysis (The others are all plural, maybe tests)
    screenings

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