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Is this a good thesis statement?

Filth is characterized by dirt, foul language, and corrupt conditions. Baldwin personifies the meaning of filth through Gabriel’s character and his actions brilliantly.

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    You might want to put "brilliantly" after "personifies" as the adverb goes with that verb.

    Sra

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    thanks!

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