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Does this sentence sound good or should I change it up?

They expected a grandeur lifestyle filled with endless opportunities to be successful and happy.

  • English -

    You need to change it. The word "grandeur" is a noun, and you've used it as an adjective modifying "lifestyle."

    http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/grandeur

    Find an adjective that expresses a similar idea.

  • english -

    Would it just be better if i said:
    They expected a lifestyle filled with endless opportunities to be successful and happy.

  • English -

    You could do it that way. Or you could use "grandiose" (an adjective) to modify "lifestyle."

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