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. Which of the following best describes these sentences from a welcome message?
Our company is pleased to welcome you as one of our valued customers. We are looking forward to receiving many more fine orders from you in the near future. We especially appreciate the size of your recent order.

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Sincere and enthusiastic
Selfish-sounding
Wordy and stuffy
Obviously sales-oriented

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