posted by Clair .
Help me create a better thesis statement than this:
Three arguments can be identified in “The Private History of a Campaign That Failed” that support the idea that war isn’t for everyone.
What are the three arguments in a nut shell?
The arguments are that soldiers should be adequately trained before entering a war, soldiers should consist of men not boys, and war could be traumatizing for the weak of mind.
I need with thesis and outline