Sra, thanks so much for the help yesterday with my French.
Here is the work, and I got my teacher to check it over, and she corrected some areas, so I thought to let you know.
1. Nous sommes allés à Vancouver où nous avons rencontré nos cousins.
2. À Vancouver nous sommes allés à Science World, où nous avons vu des expositions.
3. Nous avons fait du shopping au centre commercial, et nous avons acheté beaucoup de vêtements.
4. Nous sommes allés à la ferme, où nous avons rangé de petits.
Teacher corrected this sentence. Corrections are in Capital letters.
4. Nous sommes allés à la ferme, où nous avons ACCEUILLI deS petits POIS.
5. Nous avons conduit à la PNE, et nous sommes allés sur des tours.
---She changed A la --to AU, as she said it was Masculine.
6. Nous sommes allés à L'Aquarium, de voir des poissons.
--She got rid of the DE, and added POUR.
The rest of the sentences were good too. Same with Number 9...
Nous avons couru vers le Parc, près de notre maison, à jouer sur les balançoires.
--She took out the à, and added POUR in replace.
Sra Im working on another set of 10 sentences, and will post them onto here, as soon as I'm done. Thanks for all the help:D
Sorry, I just look at part of the senten ces. I have no idea what the PNE is but exposition IS feminine.
It is usually "de" petits pois.
Sra (aka Mme)
P.S. On second thought with "petits pois" the adjective is considered PART of the noun, so in that case it IS "des petits pois."
Sra (aka Mme)
PNE is the playland place, with all the rides.
You're welcome! I'm glad I could help you with your French. It's great that you had your teacher check your work and made some corrections. Now, let's go through the corrections and explanations for each sentence:
1. Correct: Nous sommes allés à Vancouver où nous avons rencontré nos cousins. - This sentence is correct.
2. Correct: À Vancouver nous sommes allés à Science World, où nous avons vu des expositions. - This sentence is correct.
3. Correct: Nous avons fait du shopping au centre commercial, et nous avons acheté beaucoup de vêtements. - This sentence is correct.
4. Correction: Nous sommes allés à la ferme, où nous avons ACCEUILLI deS petits POIS. - The correction made by your teacher is to use "accueilli" (welcomed) instead of "rangé" (arranged), and "petits pois" (peas) instead of "de petits" (of small). This makes the sentence mean "We went to the farm, where we welcomed peas."
5. Correction: Nous sommes allés AU PNE, et nous sommes allés sur des tours. - Your teacher corrected "à la" to "au" because "parc d'attractions" (amusement park) in this context is masculine. The use of "au" means "to the."
6. Correction: Nous sommes allés à L'Aquarium POUR voir des poissons. - Your teacher made two corrections here. Firstly, she removed the "de" before "voir" because it wasn't necessary. Secondly, she added "pour" which means "to" or "in order to." This makes the sentence mean "We went to the Aquarium to see fish."
Regarding the corrections your teacher made, they all seem appropriate and improve the accuracy and fluency of your sentences. It's great that you are open to feedback and willing to make corrections, as it helps improve your language skills. I look forward to seeing your next set of sentences. Let me know if you have any further questions!