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would i say: this would greatly contribute to successful customer advices on footwear.

or

this would greatly contribute to successful advices to customers on footwear.

thanx =)

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    Neither!

    This would contribute greatly to successful customer advice about footwear.
    (but I really don't like that much either)

    This would contribute greatly to successful advice about footwear for customers.
    Make sure it's ABSOLUTELY CLEAR what "This" is referring to.

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    NOTE: "advice" (there is no plural form of this word)

  • english language -

    thank you ;)

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    You're welcome.

    Also, make sure you use proper capitalization and punctuation when you write -- you can use that awful, no-capitals stuff when texting and IMing or whatever with your friends, but to be taken seriously for academic purposes, practice correctness.

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