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THESIS
Facebook can have negative approaches such as facebook addicton, unsecure privacy, less social interaction, and causes problems with relationships,therefore i believe facebook should be limited by parents and by the users.

is this a good enough thesis??

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The thesis statement is:
Facebook should be limited by parents and users.

The other things you mentioned are in a different sentence. Take out the "I believe" part. It makes the argument sound much weaker.

Now that I answered, I have to go check my facebook. TTFN

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