WRITING(CHOCOLATE BAR)
posted by Monica
our goal is to pick a candy. My candy i picked was Mars Bar. The teacher told us to make 3 claims of our chocolate and then beside those 3 claims we have to write 3 evidences. The 3 evidences are the things im having trouble on. I have my 3 claims already but i don't have any evidence. our evidence has to relate to our 3 claims. the teacher told us to go on the computer and find evidence:
example of evidence: its the 2nd best chocolate bar(i don't think that's true)
My 3 claims are:
1. its chocolate
2. has a little bit of caramel in it
3. tastes sooo good, mouthwatering, crunchy!
PLEASE HELP ME FIND THE EVIDENCE!!! THANKS!!!

hw
for the first one perhaps say what chocolate is made from....even include from what country the cacao beans come from

Monica
that doesnt make sense to me?
i need evidence that relates to the claim and the mars bar. how do figuring wut chocolate is made from help? 
Ms. Sue
The evidence that it's chocolate can be the listing of ingredients on the wrapper plus the origin of the chocolate, if known.

hw
say that it is made from delicious cocoa powder, sugar and milk

Monica
can u tell me the rating of this chocolate bar? if it was rated 1st, 2nd etc...

Monica
wut do i do for the caramel and the tastes soo good mouthwatering crunchy part?

Ms. Sue
I no nothing about rating candy bars. Who does the ratings? Why? What about differences in taste?

Ms. Sue
*know

Monica
but wut about the caramel part, what do i write about that?

Monica
i changed my 3rd claim: its now: there are lots of ways to eat it..
and my evidence is you can eat it as a snack or many people eat it as a treat on birthdays
im still having trouble for the caramel 
Arushi
for the caramel all i wrote was that the chocolate and caramel make a great combo
is that ok? 
Monica
i think its great!
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