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Can you please check if the following sentences are possible? Thank you very much in advance.

1)I attend the first year of a high school with an emphasis on science. My school is very big and is located in a two-storeyed building. The headmaster is very strict.
2) There is a school cafè on the ground floor which sells sandwiches, pasta and pizza. During the break some disabled teenagers lay out a table on which they sell food and drinks.
3) In addition, there are three vending machines on each floor.
4) To conclude, all teachers are very good, professional and qualified.
5) I don't like studying grammar, skiing OR playing on my computer.
6) I've got a big house with a big garden and a garage.I play football twice a week. We play a match on Saturday afternoons.
7) I go skiing in the winter. My hobbies are: collecting stamps, riding my bike (cycling?), and playing on my computer. I also like watching films on my computer with my friends or alone.
8)I'm a flag waver in a local suburb (quarter). I don't have any pet animals, except for a gold fish and a guppy.
9) My grandparents live in the country and have (keep?) animals such as hens and roosters.
10)I live with my brother, who is two years younger than me.I like reading scientific and technical (design?) magazines.

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    1) I am in my first year at a high school which has an emphasis on science. My school is very big and is located in a two-storeyed building. The headmaster is very strict.

    2) There is a school café on the ground floor which sells sandwiches, pasta, and pizza. During the break, some disabled teenagers set up a table on which they sell food and drinks.

    3) In addition, there are three vending machines on each floor.

    4) To conclude, all teachers are very professional and highly qualified.

    5) I don't like studying grammar, skiing, or playing on my computer.

    6) I live in a big house with a large garden and a garage. I play football twice a week. We play a match each Saturday afternoon.

    7) I go skiing in the winter. My hobbies are collecting stamps, riding my bike, and playing on my computer. I also like watching films on my computer with my friends or by myself.

    8) I'm a flag waver in a local suburb (quarter). I don't have any pets except for a gold fish and a guppy.

    9) My grandparents live in the country and keep animals, such as hens and roosters.

    10)I live with my brother, who is two years younger than I. I like reading scientific and technical magazines.

    Read and compare carefully.

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