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I am writing an argument essay on school uniforms and I need some help writing the introduction.
I am arguing in favor of school uniforms..
My thesis is ..School uniforms should be required in all public schools because not only do they cut down on the teasing and bullying but they also help students have a better focus on school and help parents to save money on school clothes.

This is what I have so far.

When most people think about school uniforms they picture well behaved private school children. However, now a days its not only private schools, lots of public schools are adopting the idea of wearing school uniforms in belief that they will help improve the overall conduct and academics of their students. Many don't believe in school uniforms because they are said to strip children of their individuality. Nevertheless,School uniforms should be required in all public schools because not only do they cut down on the teasing and bullying but they also help students have a better focus on school and help parents to save money on school clothes.

Need some tips getting this better.
Thanks!

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