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Does this sound like a good thesis statement?
Veterinary technicians role is challenging as well as satisfying.

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    1.Veterinary technicians role is challenging as well as satisfying.

    a.veterinary should be "A veterinary"
    b.technicians should be technician's

    so your sentence should read this

    A veterinary technician's role is challenging as well as satisfying.

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