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Thesis Statement; although there are people who still believe Social Security will cover our needs upon retirement, we need to limit our spending and start saving for our retirement. We need to learn to live with less so we can free up money to invest toward our retirement. Once we retire we have a loss of income, with the declining economy and the rise of expenses Social Security will not be enough to meet our needs.

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