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Those this sound like a personal easy? Is it a good hook?
After reading so many books, I have to admit that this was the first to make me cry.
My dream goal is to become a psychologist. At first I was confused and undecided but by reading this book I made up my mind. As I read the book it provoked many thoughts and feelings. Going through the pages of “A Child called ‘it’” really changed me and made me look towards a brighter future. A future that’s not only for me, but for other innocent individuals.

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    1. Put that title in the first sentence in place of "this." Making the reader wait until near the end of the paragraph to find out the name of the book is not a good hook!!

    2. That last is not a complete sentence -- fix the fragment.

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