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1. You should write down your age, height and weight on the paper. Looking at them, introduce yourself.

2. Yous should write down the information about your age, height and weight on the paper. With them, introduce yourself.

3. You should write down the numbers related to your age, height and weight on the big sheet. Showing them to the classmates, introduce yourself.

(Would you check the passages? Correct errors, please.)

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    1. You should write down your age, height, and weight on the paper. Looking at them, introduce yourself.
    It's fine.

    2. You should write down the information about your age, height, and weight on the paper. With them, introduce yourself.
    It's fine, too, but wordy. I like the first one better.

    3. You should write down the numbers related to your age, height, and weight on the big sheet. Showing them to your classmates, introduce yourself.
    Grammatically, it's OK, but very wordy. #1 is still the best!

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