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Write a fully developed paragraph on your favorite season.

Out of all the seasons, spring is by far my favorite. When spring comes, winter goes and along with it the bitter cold. I do not like the cold. Spring brings clear blue skies and the warm yellow sun smiling down upon me. The smell of freshly cut green grass is intoxicating to my lungs. And blooming flowers of Red, Yellow, and Blue, the colors so vibrant and crisp are a sight to behold. The chirping of birds in the early morning hours, the buzzing of bees during a lazy afternoon and the babbling of a creek is music to my ears. The laughter I hear on a warm spring day invites me out to play. Life starts anew with the coming of spring and no other season can compare to the happiness I feel when spring is here.

Can someone read over my paragraph and feel free to make any necessary edits.

Thank you.

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    this is a great paragraph when you described the freshly cut grass and the chirping of birds and buzzing of bees i could smell the grass and hear the bees and birds.

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