English-Ms. Sue

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So for my second paragraph how would I start it off? -Describe not just how a man looks like, but what he values, and how he behaves.

This time am I not describing a man from my point of view?
Am I describing a man like, a man can be abusive, or nice, etc.

  • English-Ms. Sue -

    This is your original assignment:

    Now it says draw a word picture of the "ideal male"

    You have done a great job. You've fulfilled the assignment.

    I don't even think you need to describe his looks -- although you could include that -- if it's important to you.

  • English-Ms. Sue -

    Oh, okay, thanks. I was starting this off like this:

    A man can have many types of characteristics. He can be adorable, or detestable. He can be attractive, or ugly. He can have a nice personality, appearance, background, and just have a good nature itself.

  • English-Ms. Sue -

    Sara! Your paragraph is fine! Please don't complicate it with extraneous and unnecessary words.

  • English-Ms. Sue -

    have I also included what a man values and behaves as well?

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