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Plus size women tend to make fashion less of a priority and more of a chore. Finding fashionable plus size clothing has become close to impossible, with the economic down fall department stores, like Nordstrom and Bloomindales have dropped plus size sections like bad habits. The search for quality, affordable and fashionable styles has become unbearably hard. So hard that most women drop shopping altogether and stick to their long brown dress.

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    Plus size women tend to make fashion less of a priority and more of a chore. (ARE THE PLUS SIZE WOMEN MAKING IT A CHORE?) Finding fashionable plus size clothing has become close to impossible, with the economic down fall department stores, like Nordstrom and Bloomindales have dropped plus size sections like bad habits. (SEPARATE INTO TWO SENTENCES. ALSO, THE ANALOGY IS NOT ACCURATE; BAD HABITS ARE VERY DIFFICULT TO STOP. "HOT POTATO"?) The search for quality, affordable and fashionable styles has become unbearably hard. So hard that most women drop shopping altogether and stick to their long brown dress.(COMBINE WITH PREVIOUS SENTENCE OR ADD "IT IS....")

    For expansion, I searched Google under the key words "fat fashions" to get this:

    http://www.google.com/search?client=safari&rls=en&q=FAT+FASHIONS&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8

    In the future, you can find the information you desire more quickly, if you use appropriate key words to do your own search. Also see http://hanlib.sou.edu/searchtools/.

    I hope this helps.

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