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This is my whole poem.
My poem dosen'thave to rhyme.
The Green Team is like an angel,dancing through the beautiful blue sky.
It is a miracle having
Dearbhail,Amber,Stacey,
Marina,Kudzayi and Sophie
in Catherine.
We work as a
Team with no
Fight's or unhappeness.
I was delighted when
I found out I was in
Catherine,because green
I my favourite colour.

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    The Green Team is like angels,
    dancing through the clear blue sky.
    Miracles are Marina,
    Stacey,Dearbhail,Amber
    and Sophie ,one and all.
    In Catherine we're a team,
    no unhappiness or fights.
    And green's my favorite color
    cause Catherine's my delight.

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