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Ms. Sue you know the description of the old house I did, well now I have to put all that into a paragraph. I want to make this paragraph seem really intersting and spooky. Ms. Sue could you please give me a spooky intro and conclusion for this, please. If not the conclusion then just the intro, please. The rest I'll do, and post on here for you to edit. Thanks a bunch :-) LOL

  • English-Ms. Sue -

    First, Sara, the introduction and conclusion of a paper are the LAST parts you write. You can't introduce something or someone without knowing exactly what you're introducing.

    Write the body of the paper first. Then write the introduction and conclusion. After you have the entire paper written and proofread, please post it. We'll be glad to make suggestions then.

    Remember, use a thesaurus when you're stuck for the right words.

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